draft page ---DMC3 doujinshi

it is a draft page for the dmc3 doujinshi i am making right now , the dialouge here is kind of dirty , (laugh)
i want to try using comic studio for the page , hope the doujinshi can be done before April .It will be 40-50 page , black and white doujinshi with color cover , feather me and my friend's fan-story for devil may cry 3 .(their works are amazing -_-,, i hope i can be half of that good , 555)